Okeeey, that was sizzling. Hot power plays from the tame side and an alpha done right, so mostly good sexy points. And I liked the inner struggle about control and the need for it, and how it was treated.
I do have a couple of issues:
It needs editing: misspellings and wrong wording.
One instance of misuse of the word feminism that can be hand-waived but bothered me.
Then of course, the more or less stupid background detail: Alcoholism doesn't stop like that. But well...
And what's up with people's bad English??? Let me tell you, you spend a couple of months working and living with people speaking another language, you learn your basic grammar fast. And come on! Latin food?? Like the whole bit from Texas down is one big heterogeneous group? She's Puerto Rican, what's Mexican have to do with her sense of childhood, or homeliness???
That fucking ending:
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Wow... I really got into it. I still had fun, and I'll read more by the author at some point.
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